so-so, lose control commentary & outtakes

this fic makes me kind of angry/disappointed but at the same time it was definitely an experiment writing-wise, so... let's get into it

( heart not giving in )

i think editing is rlly killing me sometimes, like it just takes so long for me to edit my work and... in terms of nanowrimo or whatever i think it's def slowing my output TT but at the same time my fics would be so much worse otherwise/editing really allows me to reflect on what's working and what isn't. so u win some, u lose some